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fleaJennifer Cruise and Bob Mayer, Don't Look Down.
I tried. I didn't like it. I had to skim whole sections. I don't like thrillers. There wasn't enough time to get to know the people as people. It felt rushed. It felt cartoonish. J. T. was a walking cliche, not a human. I didn't believe the love story. There were even plot holes, for cryin' out loud.
Jenny, write Gloom's love story and I'll forgive you. But no more army stuff.
I tried. I didn't like it. I had to skim whole sections. I don't like thrillers. There wasn't enough time to get to know the people as people. It felt rushed. It felt cartoonish. J. T. was a walking cliche, not a human. I didn't believe the love story. There were even plot holes, for cryin' out loud.
Jenny, write Gloom's love story and I'll forgive you. But no more army stuff.